http://toshiani007.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sariagray 2011-01-24 12:48 pm (UTC)

I liked it!!! I adore some of the lines you wrote, like "He nodded and collected his tray, Jack’s mug sitting upon it with a lonely sort of pride, and proceeded to the captain’s office.", cute!!! =)
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