This is a really interesting adaptation! *_* There were a couple of lines, especially, that really felt like them... “No, we can’t. We don’t have the time anymore.” “We’ll make time.” *_* I can totally see where you drew the connections. *nods*

Anyway~ Nice job. :D I'm not usually that convinced by Mpreg, but this worked disconcertingly well for them, really. *_*

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