awww! this is lovely, and, in a way, quite sweet; not quite sure that's the tone you were going for, but all the metaphors and description and the way they interacted with each other and all the underlying emotion in their gestures and what they didnt say was lovely=D
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Date: 2011-01-12 09:34 pm (UTC)