I don't see why this round sucked your soul, I loved this. I left you my notes over at the site.
You write these two beautifully and, more importantly, in character. Personally I thought this was perfect (and if you're counting it's the second time out of three I've picked you as the winner!)
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Date: 2011-03-29 07:12 am (UTC)You write these two beautifully and, more importantly, in character. Personally I thought this was perfect
(and if you're counting it's the second time out of three I've picked you as the winner!)