Love the beginning, where Zeus!Jack and Ganymede!Ianto have a quiet moment to themselves before the pantheon rushes in. I really loved Gwen as Demeter, and Rhys saying that he needs to stay mortal for her to keep her ties to humanity was... I don't know how to describe it but it reminded me of Demeter turning the world to snow after Persephone was kidnapped and it made me think, "Now she needed a Rhys." The inclusion of various myths was awesome. I think I what I liked best was the way you wrote the Jack/Ianto parts, that there were constant but subtle reminders that they were playing the parts of Zeus and Ganymede, and so their dynamics are different from those in canon. And don't worry, the sex was good.
You can have my babies. Or cookies. XD THANK YOU! ILU muchly. ♥♥
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Date: 2011-08-29 04:34 am (UTC)The inclusion of various myths was awesome.
I think I what I liked best was the way you wrote the Jack/Ianto parts, that there were constant but subtle reminders that they were playing the parts of Zeus and Ganymede, and so their dynamics are different from those in canon.
And don't worry, the sex was good.
You can have my babies. Or cookies. XD THANK YOU! ILU muchly.
♥♥