I loved Suzie's perspective of her teammates, and I liked that you addressed her discomfort with Jack and his problem with personal space (among other things).
Also, I love you so much for making Suzie be nice to Ianto. So many fics have her being mean and blackmailing him, and yet I always see them as two people with very much in common (dark secrets, sarcasm, daddy issues) who would probably (in my headcanon anyway) have spent at least some time commiserating with each other about the team, sitting on the gantries in the middle of the night and feeding Myfanwy. (According to the BBC online supplements, Suzie was involved in Myfanwy's training. I'd love to see a fic where she and Ianto bond that way. *hint, hint*)
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Date: 2011-09-16 02:04 am (UTC)Also, I love you so much for making Suzie be nice to Ianto. So many fics have her being mean and blackmailing him, and yet I always see them as two people with very much in common (dark secrets, sarcasm, daddy issues) who would probably (in my headcanon anyway) have spent at least some time commiserating with each other about the team, sitting on the gantries in the middle of the night and feeding Myfanwy. (According to the BBC online supplements, Suzie was involved in Myfanwy's training. I'd love to see a fic where she and Ianto bond that way. *hint, hint*)
Ramble over.
Lovely fic. :)