very nice. i really liked how you showed her reactions to all of them and how each reaction seemed fitting for both the character being reacted to and her. i find it very believeable that she did all these things.
i really liked her thoughts on jack as i can see her being one of those people who really likes her own space and doesn't like to be crowded and i can see how that would come from her experiences with her father and how she sees the father parallel there as i think all of torchwood sees jack at least partly as a father figure.
i also really liked her interactions with ianto as like the others have said, she was nice to him and that's why we dont see her with him in the show. i think it would have been interesting to see at least a sentence or two exchanged between them.
where you havr her tapping an undefinable rhythm, is it just me who thought of the master at that point or am i reading waaaaaaay too much into that? ;)
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Date: 2011-09-16 08:30 pm (UTC)i really liked her thoughts on jack as i can see her being one of those people who really likes her own space and doesn't like to be crowded and i can see how that would come from her experiences with her father and how she sees the father parallel there as i think all of torchwood sees jack at least partly as a father figure.
i also really liked her interactions with ianto as like the others have said, she was nice to him and that's why we dont see her with him in the show. i think it would have been interesting to see at least a sentence or two exchanged between them.
where you havr her tapping an undefinable rhythm, is it just me who thought of the master at that point or am i reading waaaaaaay too much into that? ;)