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Title: Stay
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sariagray 
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto
Word Count: 600-700
Rating: PG13
Spoilers: None. 
Warning: Language. Historical nonsense.
Disclaimer: I do not own Torchwood. I do not make money off of Torchwood. In fact, it seems as though Torchwood owns and makes money off of ME. This is for entertainment purposes only.

Author’s Note: Written for [livejournal.com profile] jack_ianto_las . The prompt was "Arrogance diminishes wisdom." The quote is from Anne Boleyn who, if you are familiar with history, you may consider to be the perfect example of the prompt. But that's neither here nor there. ;)

Stay



“Stay,” Jack offers magnanimously, the ever-gracious host.

The word bounces around the room only to fall on deaf ears as Ianto carefully zips up his trousers. Settling back against the pillow, Jack watches as Ianto scoops up his cufflinks, watch, and mobile from the tiny nightstand. He deposits the affects into his pocket with resounding finality.

“I’ll see you in the morning, sir,” Ianto murmurs.

“Stay,” Jack appeals as he leans forward to brush a fingertip across a bruise under Ianto’s right eye.

It’s small, slightly ovular, and a startling red-purple against the pale skin. There isn’t much swelling, though, and Owen had barely given the mark a precursory glance. There were more important things (Tosh’s sprained wrist, the bloody gash on Gwen’s right leg that ruined her favorite jeans) competing for the doctor’s focus.

Ianto blinks, shakes his head, and allows his lips to curl up into something that Jack suspects is supposed to be a smile. It manages to make Ianto looked terrified and angry, but his eyes reveal very little.

“I really should get home, sir,” Ianto half-apologizes.

“Stay,” Jack beams, certain now of his imminent victory.

Ianto sighs, runs a hand through his hair, bites at his lower lip, worries the pink flesh with his teeth, and nods.

Ianto meticulously undoes all of his dressing. There seems to be a reluctance about the way he removes his clothing; each article is stripped with deliberation and care, each pearlescent disc delicately slipped through its buttonhole, each crease of fabric smoothed with tender devotion. Far from erotic, it seems religious, ritualistic, and dire. The articles are all neatly draped over the back of a chair and Ianto brushes his hand over the pile once, twice, as though speaking his final goodbyes.

Raising an eyebrow, Jack clears his throat. The deer-in-headlights look that crosses Ianto’s face straddles the line between adorable and frustrating, and it’s all Jack can do to keep from laughing.

“They’ll still be here in the morning. Promise.”

Ianto nods and pads over to the bed. The distance is small, but he seems to drag out the journey as much as possible, as though he were about to be executed. There may be some truth to that, too, as there has always been a fine line between scaffold and bedchamber. When he reaches the end of the bed, Jack half expects him to kneel with his chin on the edge.

*****

There will come a time, Ianto knows, when he will regret letting Jack talk him into spending the night; one night will quickly turn into two, then three, then a week, a month, a year. There is enough of his heart at stake when they keep it to mindless fucking without the addition of cuddling afterwards, thank you very much. And yet, here he is, all acquiescence and submission.

As he approaches the bed, he feels as though he’s walking to his execution. Not of his body, perhaps, but of something less tangible and much more precious. He’s tempted to kneel before Jack and stretch out his neck for the glistening blade of a skilled French swordsman.

And thus I take my leave of the world and of you all, and I heartily desire you all to pray for me. O Lord have mercy on me, to God I commend my soul.

He can’t quite recall who said that – some pretty, ill-used monarch, if he remembers correctly – but it seems bizarrely fitting. He crawls between the sheets and has to suppress the desire to trail those inauspicious words across Jack’s skin, ghosting breath from his temple to his jaw to his chest.

Jack grins at him with such smugness that Ianto has to struggle to hold back a harsh laugh.

“Comfortable?” Jack asks.

Ianto nods, granting himself the small pleasure of shifting even closer to Jack’s warmth. It is an unwise decision, he wagers, but Ianto Jones has danced on the knife’s edge before and has lived to tell the tale. He’s strong enough to survive this, too.
 
The End
 

Date: 2011-04-26 11:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toshiani007.livejournal.com
That was brilliant, excellent fic!!!

Date: 2011-04-28 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

Date: 2011-04-26 11:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] siobhan-jane.livejournal.com
Love it! There's a poetic tragic feel to this...with an undercurrent of adorable Jack. Perfect.

Date: 2011-04-28 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
:) Thank you! Adorable Jack is fun!

Date: 2011-04-27 01:08 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] analineblue.livejournal.com
I really, really like how you used the prompt here. *__* That image of the march to the scaffold is just perfect for Ianto here. I liked the juxtaposition of POVs too... And it's interesting, because I get the impression that Ianto thinks this whole execution thing is all in his head? That all Jack's seeing is that he's won, and convinced Ianto stay, but... Because we see Jack's POV first, we know that's not the case? And I liked that a lot. ♥
Edited Date: 2011-04-27 01:08 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-04-28 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Give the lady a prize! Yes, exactly that, yes. Because...Jack has his own, unique insecurities. And it's balanced interestingly because Ianto's view of his own execution march is still different than Jack's view of Ianto's execution march. Jack sees it as the people who are in close proximity to him never last. Ianto sees it as losing...himself. So. Yes. Sorry for rambling lol So...thank you! ♥

Date: 2011-04-27 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sassysailorgirl.livejournal.com
Really powerful!

Date: 2011-04-28 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2011-04-27 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thebuttonontop.livejournal.com
ooooh, I see parallels. I like parallels. this is gorgeous... powerful. ...so much symbolism and meaning in so few words.

also... appropriate sound. :p

Date: 2011-04-28 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Haha! I was hoping someone would notice that! Thank you! :)

Date: 2011-04-27 04:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com
Oh I liked this one. Loved the different perspective of the same situation.

brilliant

FYI, Henry and Anne had a hunting lodge near me. it was destroyed by fire hundreds of years ago but the church they used to worship at when they were in residence is still standing and in use. Thought you might like that useless fact.

Date: 2011-04-28 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! And I do like that not-so-useless-fact! Very much! That's...oh, wonderful. I want to go!

ALSO - Happy Birthday! :)

Date: 2011-04-28 09:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] choccy-grl.livejournal.com
Thanks.

Glad my fact was not so useless :)

Date: 2011-04-27 06:38 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bk_forever
Oh *hugs poor Ianto* He can't refuse Jack, and he knows he's dooming himself. He's falling, and snuggling with Jack all night will just make him fall faster. Jack really has no idea what he's doing to Ianto.

Date: 2011-04-28 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
I'm sure he'll find out soon enough! Thanks!

Date: 2011-04-27 10:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chironsgirl.livejournal.com
I feel that I must accuse you ....of literature. *raises fine Toledo steel epee in salut*
XOXOXO

Date: 2011-04-28 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Literature!? That's hearsay! ;) Thank you, especially for the salute! ;)

Date: 2011-04-28 01:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angel-gospel.livejournal.com
Very, very cute, even with Ianto's negativity. I love how determined and patient Jack is, not wavering at all during Ianto's polite rejections.

Date: 2011-04-28 09:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thanks! :)

Date: 2011-04-28 07:30 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] lone-star-woman.livejournal.com
Adorable Jack and bordering-on-the-melodramatic Ianto. I like it.

Date: 2011-04-28 09:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! *Pats Ianto on the head* The dear boy has tendencies. :)

Date: 2011-04-28 09:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] owensheart.livejournal.com
Great fic and wonderfully written.

Date: 2011-04-28 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2011-04-28 04:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nancybrown.livejournal.com
I really like this, the demanding and the acquiescence.

Date: 2011-04-28 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2011-04-28 07:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com
interesting the back and forth shift of pov between jack and ianto.

Date: 2011-04-28 09:06 pm (UTC)

ah...

Date: 2011-04-29 01:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lawford.livejournal.com
Love these little moments fics. And this was great:
And thus I take my leave of the world and of you all, and I heartily desire you all to pray for me. O Lord have mercy on me, to God I commend my soul.

He can’t quite recall who said that – some pretty, ill-used monarch, if he remembers correctly – but it seems bizarrely fitting. He crawls between the sheets and has to suppress the desire to trail those inauspicious words across Jack’s skin, ghosting breath from his temple to his jaw to his chest.

Re: ah...

Date: 2011-04-29 11:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
I'm really really pleased that you love them, because I'm completely incapable of writing anything else. ;) Thanks! ♥

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