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Title: The Long Con
Author: [livejournal.com profile] sariagray  
Characters/Pairings: Jack/Ianto, Gwen (sort of), OC
Word Count:
~700
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Spoilers for End of Days/KKBB, The House of the Dead, and COE. Contains quotes from the final scene of COE: Day Five.
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: I do not own Torchwood. I do not make money off of Torchwood. In fact, it seems as though Torchwood owns and makes money off of ME. This is for entertainment purposes only.
Beta: The ever-amazing [livejournal.com profile] analineblue, who basically is two thirds of my brain.
Summary: “Are you going back to him?” “I came back for you.”
Author's Note:  I don’t even know. I broke it, you guys. Because I can’t leave well enough alone.

 
The Long Con


Gwen: You okay?
Jack: Yeah.
Gwen: Did it work?
Jack: Traveled all sorts of places. This planet is too small. The whole world is like a graveyard.
Gwen: Come back with us.
Jack: Haven't traveled far enough yet. Got a lot of dirt to shake off my shoes. And right now, there's a cold-fusion cruiser surfing the ion reefs just at the edge of the solar system, just waiting to open its transport dock.




The light in Ianto’s room is dim; a small table lamp on his nightstand give off a soft, yellow glow. It has been left on to perpetuate the fantasy that Ianto will finally get through at least the first chapter of the novel he’d been attempting to read for the past three months. He’d gotten through a paragraph a day, at most, during Jack’s disappearance, and then Jack had returned looking weary and uncertain. That had been almost a week ago. Ianto hasn’t picked up the book since.

Instead he is sprawled, almost completely passed out, on the mattress, shirtless but still wearing his trousers, the belt partially removed so that the heavy buckle dangles over the side of the bed. He is awake enough to know that he’ll be uncomfortable if he doesn’t finish changing, but so close to blissful sleep that he can’t find a reason to care.

Warm hands tug at his hips and he hears the clink of metal on wood as his belt falls away. His trousers are slipped off, too, and he moans when the cool air hits his legs. There is a series of clicks, a muttered curse, and the red light behind Ianto’s eyelids fades to a beautiful, sweet black.

“Shhh, sleep.”

Ianto tries to nod, but his head isn’t working properly. There isn’t really a need to acknowledge, anyway. The mattress shifts and dips, an arm tightens around his chest, and Ianto settles back against the warm body.

Lips press against the back of his head and Ianto snuffles into his pillow. The bed shifts again and Ianto’s fingers fly to grasp the hand that rests, fingers splayed, above his stomach.

“Stay,” Ianto murmurs and those lips return to the back of his head, the nape of his neck, his shoulder.

“Not going anywhere.”

“You came back,” he notes sleepily, his voice warm and thick and pleased, even to his own ears.

“For you. Always for you.”

It is the first solid night’s sleep Ianto’s had in months.



Jack hurls himself into the dimly lit, cavernous room and throws his coat onto the nearest available surface as though it carries the plague. The desk upon which it falls is square and metal, colder and more impersonal than even Owen’s autopsy table had been. He longs for his old office, his old desk with its rounded corners and polished surface. He longs for the Hub and its heartbreaking familiarity. He longs for the clanking of pipes, the low murmur of water, the whir of machinery, the confident click-clomp of Gwen’s boots, Ianto’s soft, distracted humming –

“Well?” The voice in the shadows is rough and unfeeling. “Were you able to convince him to seal the rift?”

“Yes. It’s done,” Jack spits as he closes his eyes, covering his face with his hands. “The rift is closed.”

He stops bothering to hold himself up and sinks into the battered cushions of the old sofa. The weight he’s carried on his chest for the past six months grows heavier and squeezes his heart like a winch. He wasn’t certain when it happened, but the gravity of earth seems too strong and begins to crush his bones. He toys absently with edges of an old cigarette burn in the upholstery, his fingers picking at it like a scab.

“Good,” the voice intones. “Very good. I have word that our end has been sealed, as well. We thank you for your service.”

“Hey!” Jack’s eyes fly open, narrow, and he bares his teeth. He grinds his growled words. “We had a deal!”

The voice sighs. “Of course, Captain Harkness. We will transport you as promised. You were given the coordinates, correct?”

“Yes.”

“We need three days to prepare. We will be in touch with the exact hour of departure.”

Jack can hear the thunk of departing footsteps as he closes his eyes. The thought of escaping, of fleeing this planet covered in bone dust, is the only thing shielding him against the pain and the dry taste of ash in his mouth. He stands up, stumbles over to the dented, grimy refrigerator and pulls out a bottle of water to wash out the taste.

It is late, well gone two in the morning, and the warehouse is completely silent.

“I didn’t lie,” Jack whispers to the air. “I may have betrayed you, Ianto Jones, but I never lied.”
 


Gwen: You cannot run away.
Jack: Oh, yes, I can. Just watch me.


The End
 

Date: 2011-07-16 12:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trektotorch.livejournal.com
Well--this is an interesting twist. Jack as the betrayer in that he plan all along for Ianto to be the one to close the rift. It is not clear in the radio show what the betrayal is--most think it is that Ianto betrayed Jack by not leaving with him. I liked your twist on it.

Date: 2011-07-17 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thanks! And yeah, I just...Jack's a conman. I like to use that occasionally. :D

Date: 2011-07-16 01:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] nancybrown.livejournal.com
Hell of a creepy idea. :)

Date: 2011-07-17 01:25 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Well, I may have an affinity for creepy things! :D

Date: 2011-07-16 02:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] miss-bekahrose.livejournal.com
Oh goodness. Wow. *hugs Jack*.

Date: 2011-07-17 01:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
I KNOW. I yelled at myself for even thinking about this. And then I sent myself to my room to write it. I send myself mixed signals all the time! :D Thanks!

Date: 2011-07-16 03:09 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] remuslives23.livejournal.com
Ooh, twisty twist hurts! But it's so perfectly manipulative, selfish Jack, lost in his own pain. Another regret for the landfill of regrets he carries.

Date: 2011-07-17 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you hun! And yeah, I like...beating up on Jack sometimes. He takes it so nicely. *evil cackle* I'll be good now, though. I'm on a fluff kick....*shifty eyes*

Date: 2011-07-16 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neeems.livejournal.com
Wow, interesting twist - didn't see that coming. Poor Ianto and Jack... *hugs them both*

Date: 2011-07-17 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! I like twists and turns! :D

Date: 2011-07-16 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] drumminvamp.livejournal.com
*sniffs* I must be really hormonal because I keep crying over Jack/Ianto after listening to The House of the Dead.

Wonderful twist.

Date: 2011-07-17 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! And you and me both! I cry at nothing. But this? I keep sobbing about it! Something in the water, maybe? ;)

Date: 2011-07-16 08:22 am (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] codename-sherry.livejournal.com
D: well that was certainly something I didn't expect. Gosh!

Date: 2011-07-17 01:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
*Cackles maniacally!* Ahem. I mean. Thank you for commenting! ;)

Date: 2011-07-16 11:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mcparrot.livejournal.com
OMG. Yes. You've right. You broke it.

Damn.
Good fic though.
Wow. I'm... don't know what to say.
You have a curly brain.

Date: 2011-07-17 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! I like my curly brain. *pats it* I promise I will make good with the fluff soon! :D

Date: 2011-07-16 03:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jsks.livejournal.com
wibble

Date: 2011-07-17 01:29 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-16 07:54 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] bk_forever
*shivers* That is somehow so cold, to use Ianto that way, after everything he's done for Jack...

Date: 2011-07-17 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
I like cold, calculating Jack sometimes. Especially Cold, Calculating, But With A Conscience Jack! It's delicious. :)

Date: 2011-07-17 05:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eldarwannabe.livejournal.com
I...just...AHH! *flail*

Oh, oh, oh, that was amazing. You are brilliant. Dark, but brilliant. The use of the quotes as a bookend set the mood perfectly and it's all so twisty and painful. I think I have to re-read it again, just to process. *scrolls up*

Date: 2011-07-17 05:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eldarwannabe.livejournal.com
Ok, you know something crazy?

This actually makes A LOT of sense. Because while Ianto closing the rift is nice and heroic and all, if it was so easy, you think it would have happened already. Take some Welsh rocks and bang them together every time something Really Big happens with the rift, which should be pretty often. But a huge, overarching conspiracy where Ianto had to be set up the exact right place/time with the right motivations? ...yeah, ok.

OH MAN. YOU'VE INFECTED MY BRAIN.

Date: 2011-07-17 09:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
You know, I didn't even think of that! Hmmmmm. That the whole thing is a conspiracy, from that early on.

ETA: Somehow, LJ ate my comment. Anyway! Yes. I mean, God, it could go back as far as Lisa - why he kept Ianto around. I don't know how to explain away the refusals in Fragments, but....
Edited Date: 2011-07-17 09:40 am (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-17 09:41 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Muahahaha! Thank you! <3

Date: 2011-07-25 06:01 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] chamilet
Ouch. That hurt.

Date: 2011-07-26 12:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
*hands you a bandaid*

The author giveth and the author taketh away. ;)

Date: 2011-08-13 11:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dil-deal.livejournal.com
Ouch..Wow, that was DARK!
And kind of unique, as not many people go the dark route these days. Really brilliant.

Date: 2011-09-18 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sariagray.livejournal.com
Thank you! Again, I am late. I am always late with the responding. *Rolls eyes at self* In any case, thank you! I...I like dark, really. :)

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